Sorry for disappearing for a while, guys. I had a little Burnout and no matter how I read or reread the novel in the last month, it was as if the computer keys had become knives in my fingers. Nothing I wrote seemed good, nothing I thought of for the story seemed interesting. Where before I spent 1 to 2 hours to make a chapter, this last month I spent 8 hours and something so bad came out that I simply deleted everything and tried to start again.
I finally managed to find an interesting direction to follow, so look forward to frequent releases again. :D